Incomplete sentences are not "writing", they are text messages. Punctuation is used to convey pauses, tie related thoughts together and expound on the basic sentence. Business speak is not the measure of good writing skills. I would ask to re-write my essay in 12 hours using complete sentences and proper punctuation, because as written, not only is author's point lost, making your argument stand is failed too. Do you think I am right? Or am I missing something else?